Abstract
Previous work has demonstrated that the use of structured abstracts can lead to greater completeness and clarity of information, making it easier for researchers to extract information about a study. In academic year 2007/08, Durham University’s Computer Science Department revised the format of the project report that final year students were required to write, from a ‘traditional dissertation’ format, using a conventional abstract, to that of a 20-page technical paper, together with a structured abstract. This study set out to determine whether inexperienced authors (students writing their final project reports for computing topics) find it easier to produce good abstracts, in terms of completeness and clarity, when using a structured form rather than a conventional form. We performed a controlled quasi-experiment in which a set of ‘judges’ each assessed one conventional and one structured abstract for its completeness and clarity. These abstracts were drawn from those produced by four cohorts of final year students: two preceding the change, and the two following. The assessments were performed using a form of checklist that is similar to those used for previous experimental studies. We used 40 abstracts (10 per cohort) and 20 student ‘judges’ to perform the evaluation. Scored on a scale of 0.1–1.0, the mean for completeness increased from 0.37 to 0.61 when using a structured form. For clarity, using a scale of 1–10, the mean score increased from 5.1 to 7.2. For a minimum goal of scoring 50% for both completeness and clarity, only 3 from 19 conventional abstracts achieved this level, while only 3 from 20 structured abstracts failed to reach it. We conclude that the use of a structured form for organising the material of an abstract can assist inexperienced authors with writing technical abstracts that are clearer and more complete than those produced without the framework provided by such a mechanism.





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This work was performed as part of the EPIC (Evidence-based Practices Informing Computing) project, funded by the UK’s Engineering & Physical Sciences Research Council (EPSRC). We would like to thank those students who took part in the study as judges, the anonymous referees for their helpful comments and suggestions and Professor Jim Hartley of Keele University for his advice about structured abstracts.
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Appendix A: Task Description
The purpose of our study is to investigate how information about student projects in software engineering and computer science can be extracted from the abstracts provided with the final dissertations. You are asked to act as a judge for the abstracts taken from two sample dissertations (allocated randomly) and for each one to complete a copy of the evaluation form supplied.
To perform the tasks, we ask that you view the two abstracts in the order specified, and that you view each of them on a computer screen, preferably using a browser using a Mozilla engine, such as Firefox, since the layout provided has been optimised for this. You should complete one form for each abstract—please ensure that you complete Form 1 first and then Form 2 as the ordering is important. You may take as long as is necessary to perform the task, but we would not expect that the task should take longer than about ten minutes.
Can you please also complete the third (short) form that will help us classify your input.
David Budgen and Andy Burn.
Appendix B: Abstract Evaluation Form
Registration Code allocated to you:
Number/Title of abstract:
For each of the following questions about the abstract, you should provide one of the following responses Yes, No, Unsure or N/A (Not Applicable) by drawing a ring around your chosen response.

Please give an assessment of the clarity of this abstract by circling a number on the scale of 1–10 below, where a value of 1 represents Very Obscure and 10 represents Extremely Clearly Written.
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 |
Appendix C: Additional Questions
To assist us with analysing your responses, please provide us with some additional information about yourself and your previous experience. Again, please ring the relevant words where appropriate.
Is English your first language: Yes / No
(This is so that we can check whether structured abstracts are more readable for non-native English speakers.)
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Did you have any knowledge about structured abstracts before taking part in this study? Yes / No
If your answer was “Yes”, then please indicate the nature of your knowledge:
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Heard about them, but not seen them before: Yes / No
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Read papers with structured abstracts: Yes / No
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Created structured abstracts yourself: Yes / No
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Other (please specify):
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Please describe up to three things that you like about conventional (non-structured) abstracts.
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Please describe up to three things you like about structured abstracts.
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Overall, do you prefer to read:
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Structured abstracts
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Conventional (non-structured) abstracts
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No preference
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Overall, would you prefer to write:
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Structured abstracts
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Conventional (non-structured) abstracts
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No preference
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Budgen, D., Burn, A.J. & Kitchenham, B. Reporting computing projects through structured abstracts: a quasi-experiment. Empir Software Eng 16, 244–277 (2011). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10664-010-9139-3
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