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Feedback Orchestration: Structuring Feedback for Facilitating Reflection and Revision in Writing

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Writing, as a complex creative task, demands rich feedback in the writing revision process. While much effort has focused on improving diversity and quality of feedback, little research explored how feedback can be effectively integrated into revisions. This work introduces Feedback Orchestration that guides novices to revise and reflect on their creative work by structuring feedback in the revision process. Three design guidelines, including a rhetorical structure, meta-feedback, and a flexible revision workflow, are used for supporting novices to filter information, identify weaknesses, and facilitate revision. The presented framework will close the gap between feedback provided and the subsequent performance by structuring revision processes.

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  • (2024)A Design Space for Intelligent and Interactive Writing AssistantsProceedings of the 2024 CHI Conference on Human Factors in Computing Systems10.1145/3613904.3642697(1-35)Online publication date: 11-May-2024

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      CSCW '18 Companion: Companion of the 2018 ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing
      October 2018
      518 pages
      ISBN:9781450360180
      DOI:10.1145/3272973
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      1. feedback-driven revision
      2. online feedback exchange
      3. scaffolding
      4. writing feedback

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